Friday, February 28, 2014

Boiling it down to 3 sentences

This week I had a super unpleasant time boiling down my idea from a 34-page detailed Publisher mockup to three sentences.  You can see them at http://theocp.launchrock.com/

The assignment coming up next is to provide a minimal version of your product/website and get responses from the public to validate your idea.  You're supposed to see if your solution is matching with a problem that people are having.

First pass:  I create a five-page website (super happy about that, since I bought the domain a year ago and hadn't posted anything on it) and three super long, detailed survey targeting three different customer segments.  I'm gonna get me some FEEDBACK!

Mentor:  Shorter. 

Second pass:  I create a three-page website with one long survey.

Mentor:  Shorter.

Third pass:  I create a one-page website with a shorter survey:  email address and zipcode.

Mentor:  Shorter.

Final draft:  I create a three-sentence website with a survey consisting of "give us your email address."

Mentor:  Good.  Now add a video.

Well, shoot.  Now I get to go figure out how to make a one-minute tutorial video.  Preferably by tonight.  But no worries, at least I now have a place to put all the information that was cut out of the five-page website, and I'm quickly becoming an expert in boiling things down. 

Want to see the finished product?  Visit http://theocp.launchrock.com/.  It'll only take a minute to read it.  Literally.

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